Broken Vow

Broken Vow

Wemmawriter

Glee

Summary: Will is a broken man after being jilted by Emma, the love of his life, at the altar. But where is she, and will she ever return to his loving arms again? An off-shot from the Glee episode 'I Do'.

Rated: T

Chapter 1

‘Emma Pillsbury had cried a bucket of regrets today.’ I like this!

This is so heart-wrenching to read that I almost feel like giving up and trying to pick up again tomorrow, but alas this must continue, and maybe I’ll even learn something from it.

That cab driver is a jerk! Good for Emma letting her fiery personality (redhead’s are known for their fierceness) take over to tell that guy off!

I’m going to sound like a real jerk (like the cab driver) but if she just ran out of her own wedding, so I guess I don’t understand what the hell she’s freaking out for. I’ve never really watched Glee (I’ve listened to plenty of songs from Glee, though) so maybe that’s why I don’t understand, but I would think that someone who just ran from her own wedding wouldn’t be sitting in the backseat of a cab talking about how she can’t believe she just did that. She should be jumping out of the cab and running right back in.

OH MY GOD! NO WAY!!

I think I get it now.

I’m pretty sure Will is the music teacher and I’m pretty sure I’m not the only one who finds him attractive. Right?

For a second I really believed she was going to do the right thing. Of course, I was wrong.

This is a really great start to your story, and I’m sure if this continues you’re going to have a lot of fans.

Chapter 2

This whole story is very sad, so far!

I don’t think it’s a good idea for Finn to confess that he kissed the groom’s fiancé. Just throwing that out there.

Okay, so it’s really hard to fathom being left at the alter by the person you love. As hard as I try, I can’t help but feel Will’s pain. It makes my heart hurt.

Awwww to have him blaming himself for the entire mess makes it even worse!

How in the world is Will going to go back to school after this mess? Wow.

It’s almost funny that Will’s parents were very supportive of the marriage and he stayed and Emma’s weren’t and she ran. I wonder if that has a part of it.

I like Will’s parents. They seem pretty cool.

Sue is pretty funny, even though she sounds like a nutcase right about now.

‘rehab for the ginger impaired.’ Lol best line!

Will’s going to search for Emma while the former glee club members party it up. Although, I kind of feel like there isn’t going to be much partying going on while they’re all worried about Will.

Worst. Ending. Ever. Just kidding, it was really good, but really hard to read. I just feel this overwhelming despair reading those words.

Nonetheless, great job. I’m excited to see where this goes!